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So it seems like noones home,
And I feel so alone,
My minds like a womb,
Locked inside a tomb,
Even if I run so far,
I'll still be stuck in tar,
Why does it end so soon?
Why is my mind a tomb?
Why do I feel this way?
Everythings going my way.
Good grades, Great girl,
Lifes good, I feel loved,
Moms happy, dads happy,
Friends are fine,
But then I wonder...
Why aren't I?
©2006-2009 ~johnny-dangerously
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It's a wonderful poem. Kinda shows how it's not smart to back yourself into a corner trying to please everyone else and pretend you're actually happy with what they want. At least that's what I got from it.

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Hee hee XD I liked that one. :heart:

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Thats basicly it. Its hard to explain the situation, 'cause Im stupid, and I can't figure out whats going on in my own head, but, yeah. Thanks for the comment. ^^

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Who is the form, following the function of what, and what I am is a man in a mask.

I can see that.

Im not questioning your powers of observation, im merely remarking on the paradox of asking a masked man, who he is.
You are not stupid just because you lack the skill to describe something well enough. Everyone is at a loss for words sometimes and most people just plain forget the ones they use. Sometimes it takes someone else with an uninvolved viewpoint to give you the words you need, or just state it more plainly for you. And You're Welcome!

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